My marks of my essay.
Analysis: 8Examples: 8
Terminology: 3 =19 Overall Grade: U
Mr Shaikh marks of my essay.
Analysis: 13
Examples: 13
Terminology: 5 =31 Overall grade: C
Targets:
To focus on fewer areas in detail rather than several in a vague way.
To revise sound and music terms.
To manage my time better as i didn't cover everything in the sequence.